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評価: 50 / 1 Review / 2015/02/12 17:07:01

sujiko
sujiko 50 IT、金融などを中心として社内翻訳者を数年経験後、フリーランス翻訳者として...
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英語

Have you received the e-mail?
As I have not heard from you, I am writing to you.
If you have not received it yet, I will send it again.
As I would like to reply 00, I appreciate your understanding.
Regarding the makeup box, if you give me a permission, we can manufacture it in Japan.
I will be looking forward to your reply.

Could you agree to 00 for the payment, which is the same as the last time?
You said that you were going to take a picture of the model of the new item in February.
After you complete it, would you send it to me immediately?

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yakuok 60 ・日英・英日翻訳・通訳。 ・海外の国際校で教育を受け、イギリス英語・アメ...
yakuokはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2015/02/14 08:21:33

元の翻訳
Have you received the e-mail?
As I have not heard from you, I am writing to you.
If you have not received it yet, I will send it again.
As I would like to reply 00, I appreciate your understanding.
Regarding the makeup box, if you give me a permission, we can manufacture it in Japan.
I will be looking forward to your reply.

Could you agree to 00 for the payment, which is the same as the last time?
You said that you were going to take a picture of the model of the new item in February.
After you complete it, would you send it to me immediately?

修正後
Have you received the e-mail?
As I have not heard from you, I am writing to you.
If you have not received it yet, I will send it again.
As I would like to reply to 00, I appreciate your understanding.
Regarding the makeup box, if you give me a permission we can manufacture it in Japan.
I will be looking forward to your reply.

Could you agree to 00 for the payment, which is the same as the last time?
You said that you were going to take a picture of the model of the new item in February.
After you complete it, would you send it to me immediately?

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