翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

評価: 61 / 1 Review / 2015/01/29 01:09:20

puccaneko
puccaneko 61 皆様、こんにちは! はじめまして。マリーステファニーと申します。 ...
日本語

一度は経験しておいても良い経験
パックツアーでアイスランドを訪問した際に1日フリーの日があったので参加。
ツアー行程は、ホテルでピックアップ(混載)>レイキャビックのツアー会社事務所でツアーに振り分け>出発>ギャウの近くの売店&ギャウ案内センターのようなところでブリーフィング(ライセンスの確認や誓約書の記入もここでした。インナーへの着替えもここ)>エントリーポイント近くに移動して器材装着>ダイビング!>休息>2本目のダイビング

英語

Even it was just a one time experience, it was really great.
I went to Iceland as a group tour and since I had a one day free day, I joined.
As for the length of the tour, hotel pick-up (consolidation) > gathering at a tour company's office Reykjavik > departure > arrival at at the store near the plate boundary and briefing at the tour guide center (confirmation of license & written oath, changing of inner clothes) > going near to the entry point, installing of equipment > Diving! > rest > second round of diving

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yakuok 60 ・日英・英日翻訳・通訳。 ・海外の国際校で教育を受け、イギリス英語・アメ...
yakuokはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★★"と評価しました 2015/01/30 01:16:01

元の翻訳
Even it was just a one time experience, it was really great.
I went to Iceland as a group tour and since I had a one day free day, I joined.
As for the length of the tour, hotel pick-up (consolidation) > gathering at a tour company's office Reykjavik > departure > arrival at at the store near the plate boundary and briefing at the tour guide center (confirmation of license & written oath, changing of inner clothes) > going near to the entry point, installing of equipment > Diving! > rest > second round of diving

修正後
Even it was just a one time experience, it was really great.
I went to Iceland as a group tour and since I had one free day, I joined this tour.
As for the length of the tour, hotel pick-up (consolidation) > gathering at a tour company's office Reykjavik > departure > arrival at at the store near the plate boundary and briefing at the tour guide center (confirmation of license & written oath, changing of inner clothes) > going near the entry point, installing of equipment > Diving! > rest > second round of diving

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