翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

評価: 52 / 1 Review / 2015/01/28 22:09:49

uckey
uckey 52
日本語

楽しかったけど・・・
想像していた通り、まるで”おとぎの国”に出てくる様な素敵な街でした。
アムステルダムからバスで約3時間で到着後、駐車場から徒歩で帰り道と名所を説明しながらマルクト広場を抜け運河に出て解散、それから自由時間でした。
帰り道の説明は分かり易かったんですが、なにせ同じような感じの道が幾つもあって、チョコレート屋さん、お土産屋さんを覘きながら歩いていると、どこかで1本道を間違えたようで道に迷ってしまい、同じところをグルグル・・集合時間は迫るしで、パニックに。

英語

I enjoyed but...
It was a fantastic town like it shows in "fairyland" as I expected.
After I arrived there by bus from Amsterdam in 3hours, I was explained the way to be back and famous sight places while I was walking from the parking and went trough Markt Plaza and came out to canal and broke up and then I had a free time.
Explanation of the way to be back was easy but I panicked because there were some similar streets and walking around chocolate shop, souvenir shop, I mistook one street and lost my way somewhere,walked around same place... Meeting time was approaching.

レビュー ( 1 )

yxn667 52 Conyacでの翻訳経歴(2014年10月登録): Standard依頼...
yxn667はこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2015/01/29 22:54:15

元の翻訳
I enjoyed but...
It was a fantastic town like it shows in "fairyland" as I expected.
After I arrived there by bus from Amsterdam in 3hours, I was explained the way to be back and famous sight places while I was walking from the parking and went trough Markt Plaza and came out to canal and broke up and then I had a free time.
Explanation of the way to be back was easy but I panicked because there were some similar streets and walking around chocolate shop, souvenir shop, I mistook one street and lost my way somewhere,walked around same place... Meeting time was approaching.

修正後
I enjoyed but...
It was a fantastic town like shown in "fairyland" as I expected.
After I arrived there by bus from Amsterdam in 3 hours, I was explained the way back and famous places while I was walking from the parking and went through Markt Plaza and came out to canal and broke up and then I had a free time.
Explanation of the way back was easy but I panicked because there were some similar streets and walking around a chocolate shop, a souvenir shop, I mistook one street and lost my way somewhere, walked around the same place... Meeting time was approaching.

コメントを追加
備考: review