翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

評価: 52 / ネイティブ 日本語 / 1 Review / 2015/01/09 21:13:45

日本語

旅行代金は、3万円ぐらいになります。
宿泊と移動費が、込みになります。
もしくは、あなたに今月 1万円 で、 来月 1万円
謝礼としてお支払いをしようと考えています。
商品が入荷するのが来月なので、今回は商品を発注するのは、やめます。次回 商品を販売する時期になって、必ず 発注します。

英語

The travel fee will cost about ¥30,000 including the lodging expense and transportation. Also, I am planning to pay ¥10,000 this month and the next month as a reward. As the goods are supposed to arrive the next month, I will not order this time.
Surely I would like to place an order when the goods are available.

Thanks,

レビュー ( 1 )

mayustardustはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2015/01/10 21:38:54

元の翻訳
The travel fee will cost about ¥30,000 including the lodging expense and transportation. Also, I am planning to pay ¥10,000 this month and the next month as a reward. As the goods are supposed to arrive the next month, I will not order this time.
Surely I would like to place an order when the goods are available.

Thanks,

修正後
The travel fee will cost about ¥30,000 including the lodging expense and transportation. Also, I am planning to pay ¥10,000 this month and the next month as a reward. As the goods are supposed to arrive next month, I will not order this time.
Surely I would like to place an order when the goods are available.

Thanks,

naoki_bee_17 naoki_bee_17 2015/01/10 22:19:20

レビューしていただきありがとうございます。

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