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備考: 家計簿アプリ”Quick Money Recorder”のプロモーション動画用ナレーション原稿になります。家計簿は直訳するとA household account bookですが、一般的に伝わりにくいようでしたら工夫した表現（e.g.Spending Tracker）に変えていただきたいです。

日本語

最も簡単で最も続けられる家計簿、”Quick Money Recorder”。
いつの間にかお金がなくなっていませんか？
Quick Money Recorderなら、支出と収入を記録するだけで、家計の無駄が分かる！
2秒で支出を記録！
Excel出力もできて、パソコンでも便利！
節約を楽しもう！人生を楽しもう！
今すぐ無料でダウンロード！

英語

The most easiest and most sustainable family accounting book, "Quick Money Record".
Do you find that your money always finishes unknowingly?
With Quick Money Recorder, you could record your expenditures and income, making known all your household wastage.
You could record down in just 2 minutes!
You can input by using Excel and is very convenient with a computer.
Enjoy being thrifty! Enjoy Life!
You can download for free now!

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lebron_2014はこの翻訳結果を"★★"と評価しました 2014/12/17 01:45:15

元の翻訳
The most easiest and most sustainable family accounting book, "Quick Money Record".
Do you find that your money always finishes unknowingly?
With Quick Money Recorder, you could record your expenditures and income, making known all your household wastage.
You could record down in just 2 minutes!
You can input by using Excel and is very convenient with a computer.
Enjoy being thrifty! Enjoy Life!
You can download for free now!

修正後
The easiest and most sustainable household financing accounting journal, "Quick Money Recorder".
Are you unconsciously losing money?
With Quick Money Recorder, you can simply record your expenditures and income and understand your useless household finances.
You could record your spendings in just 2 minutes!
You can input it in Excel making it convenient to use with a PC.
Enjoy Saving! Enjoy Life!
You can download for free now!

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