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日本語

2015/2/8（日）伊藤千晃 大阪トークショー決定!!

2/8（日）大阪 KKRホテル大阪にて伊藤千晃のトークショーが決定しました！

【開催日程】
2015/2/8（日）
1部 12:30開場 / 13:00開演
2部 16:30開場 / 17:00開演

【会場】
大阪府大阪市中央区馬場町２-２４
KKRホテル大阪 ３F 銀河の間 宴会場

英語

2015/2/8 [sunday] Be fixed Ito chiaki's talk show!

2/8 [sunday] Be fixed Ito chiaki's talk show at KKR hotel-osaka in osaka.

[opening schedule]
2015/2/8 [sunday]
part1 12:30 open/13:00 the performance begins
part2 16:30 open/17:00 the performance begins

[place]
osakaprefecture osakacity tyuouward 2-24
KKR hotel-osaka 3F room of galaxy party room

レビュー ( 1 )

[削除済みユーザ]はこの翻訳結果を"★★"と評価しました 2014/12/13 08:25:04

元の翻訳
2015/2/8 [sunday] Be fixed Ito chiaki's talk show!

2/8 [sunday] Be fixed Ito chiaki's talk show at KKR hotel-osaka in osaka.

[opening schedule]
2015/2/8 [sunday]
part1 12:30 open/13:00 the performance begins
part2 16:30 open/17:00 the performance begins

[place]
osakaprefecture osakacity tyuouward 2-24↵
KKR hotel-osaka 3F room of galaxy party room

修正後
The date[place/details] for Chiaki Ito's talk show has been set! It will be on 2015/2/8 (Sunday)

Chiaki Ito's talk show has been set for 2/8 (Sunday) at KKR Hotel Osaka in Osaka.

*Event Schedule*
2015/2/8 (Sunday)
1st Part: Venue opens 12:30, show begins 13:00
2nd Part: Venue opens 16:30, show begins 17:00

*Location*
Ginka-no-ma Banquet Hall↵
3rd floor, KKR Hotel Osaka↵
Banba-cho 2-24, Chuo-ku, Osaka City, Osaka Prefecture

I'm sorry to have to give you just 2 stars for this translation, but your translation was so close to the original Japanese, especially in punctuation and the order of the various elements, that I'm afraid a native English speaker would not be able to understand it at all.