翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

先ほど提示した代表的なプロモーションを通じ商品Aの実績は昨年に比べ大きく上昇させることができました（2013年に比べ約30%の上昇を示しています）。2013年4月からB社が販売をしているが、商品Aの売上はそこから順調に推移していることがわかります。
この図表は来年の売り上げ目標です。来年も引き続き25%以上の上昇を継続し、10億円に到達したいと考えております。
私からは以上です。　続いてプロモーション資材の紹介をCさんにご紹介いただきます。それではCさん宜しくお願いいたします。

英語

The typical promotion I just presented made the performance of commodity A was able to increase significantly compared to last year (it increase about 30% compared to 2013). Company B was selling it from April 2013, but sales of commodity A is going well from there.
This chart is sales goal of next year. We hope it can continue to rise more than 25% next year and reach one billion yen.
My speech is over. Let Mr. C to introduce the promotional materials. Please welcome Mr. C.

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[削除済みユーザ]はこの翻訳結果を"★★"と評価しました 2014/12/05 11:58:06

元の翻訳
The typical promotion I just presented made the performance of commodity A was able to increase significantly compared to last year (it increase about 30% compared to 2013). Company B was selling it from April 2013, but sales of commodity A is going well from there.
This chart is sales goal of next year. We hope it can continue to rise more than 25% next year and reach one billion yen.
My speech is over. Let Mr. C to introduce the promotional materials. Please welcome Mr. C.

修正後
The typical promotion I just presented enabled the performance of commodity A increase significantly compared to last year (it has increased about 30% compared to 2013). Company B has been selling it since April 2013, but sales of commodity A has been going well since then.
This chart is next year's sales goal. We hope it can continue to rise more than 25% next year and reach one billion yen.
My speech is over [awkward]. Let Mr. C introduce the promotional materials. Please welcome Mr. C.