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日本語

私は馬が大好きで乗馬や競馬などを愛する日本の鍼灸師です。
実は、日本の多くの騎手は職業病的に慢性の腰痛を持ちながらレースに挑んでおります。
治療は、西洋医学での診断の上に、痛み止めの注射や理学療法的な治療がメインで、一時的な緩和に留まっているのが現状です。
一部の騎手は現状の医療に満足できず、治療家を求めて国中を巡っております。幸いにして、私は数十名の騎手と出会い鍼治療させていただいております。東洋医学の神髄は自己治癒力を引き出す事にあります。

英語

I am a japanese acupuncturist, who love horse, horse riding and horse race.
I should say a number of japanese jockies race suffering backache inveterentely.
The main treatments they get are injections for pain and physical therapies based on Occidenal medical diagonosis, which only can alleviate their pain temporalily.
Some jockies are not satisfied with the treatments they actually get, and circle everywhere in Japan in seach of better healers. Fortunately, I encountered tens of jockies and perform acupuncture on them. Eastern medicine quintessence consists in ecucing natural healing ability.

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[削除済みユーザ]はこの翻訳結果を"★★"と評価しました 2014/11/09 15:40:06

元の翻訳
I am a japanese acupuncturist, who love horse, horse riding and horse race.
I should say a number of japanese jockies race suffering backache inveterentely.
The main treatments they get are injections for pain and physical therapies based on Occidenal medical diagonosis, which only can alleviate their pain temporalily.
Some jockies are not satisfied with the treatments they actually get, and circle everywhere in Japan in seach of better healers. Fortunately, I encountered tens of jockies and perform acupuncture on them. Eastern medicine quintessence consists in ecucing natural healing ability.

修正後
I am a japanese [spelling] acupuncturist, who love [s-v agreement] horse, horse riding, and horse race.
I should say a number of japanese jockies [spelling] race suffering backache inveterentely [spelling].
The main treatments they get are injections for pain and physical therapies based on Occidenal [spelling] medical diagonosis [spelling], which only can alleviate their pain temporalily [spelling].
Some jockies [spelling] are not satisfied with the treatments they actually get, and circle everywhere in Japan in seach [spelling] of better healers. Fortunately, I encountered tens of jockies [spelling] and perform acupuncture on them. Eastern medicine's quintessence consists in ecucing [spelling] natural healing ability.