翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

今、日本には大きな台風が来ています。広島は丁度今日の夕方に接近しそうです。
15日のあなたのフライトの頃にはもう台風は日本を離れているので大丈夫そうです。

日本に付いて携帯電話の番号が分かったらメールをください。
通訳の担当の女の子　ミスSからあなたへ電話をさせます。その時に18日と19日の
予定を調整しましょう。

サイケデリズムはEBISUにあります。我々が訪問することを伝えたところとても喜んでいました。

それでは長旅になりますが気を付けてお越しください。
　

英語

Now, a big typhoon comes to Japan.
It is going to come Hiroshima, about evening of today.

When you arrived at Japan and you made sured your cellphone number,
please send us e-mail to let us know your number.

We will let transfer women, Ms. S to call you,
so then,adjust our schedule of 18th and 19th.

Psychederhythm is located at Ebisu, when we let them know about our visiting,
they looks glad so much.

Then,it is long way to Japan,but please be careful to come.

レビュー ( 1 )

[削除済みユーザ]はこの翻訳結果を"★"と評価しました 2014/10/14 11:06:26

元の翻訳
Now, a big typhoon comes to Japan.
It is going to come Hiroshima, about evening of today.

When you arrived at Japan and you made sured your cellphone number, ↵
please send us e-mail to let us know your number.

We will let transfer women, Ms. S to call you,↵
so then,adjust our schedule of 18th and 19th.

Psychederhythm is located at Ebisu, when we let them know about our visiting,
they looks glad so much.

Then,it is long way to Japan,but please be careful to come.

修正後
Now, a big typhoon comes to Japan.
It is going to come Hiroshima, about evening of today [awkward].

When you arrived [tense confusion] at Japan and you made sured [not a word] your cellphone number. Please send us e-mail to let us know your number.

We will let transfer women [???], Ms. S to call you, so then adjust our schedule of 18th and 19th [awkward].

Psychederhythm is located in Ebisu. When we let them know about our visiting,
they looks [subject-very agreement] glad so much.

Then it is [article] long way to Japan, but please be careful to come [awkward].