翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

#abit1

jetspeedの返金をお待ちしています。お手数をおかけします。

いつも魅力的なオファーをいただき心から感謝しています。
あなたのオファーにはいつも強い関心を持っていますので、出来るだけ
購入したいのですが、良い返事ができず、いつも申し訳なく思っています。

SLDRに関しては、Silver/White 460/430 10.5度であれば、人気がありますが、
私の販路では、通常の8度は最近3ヵ月で殆ど売れていないようです。

英語

#abit1

I am waiting for a refund of jetspeed. Sorry for the trouble.

I greatly appreciate receiving your attractive offer every time.
I am always concerned with your offer very much, and I would like to buy it as much as possible. However, I am sorry for not make favorable reply.

Regarding SLDR, althought a type of Silver/White 460/430 10.5 degrees is popupar, a type of regular 8 degrees has not almost been sold in the last three months in my market.

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[削除済みユーザ]はこの翻訳結果を"★★"と評価しました 2014/10/03 01:45:18

元の翻訳
#abit1

I am waiting for a refund of jetspeed. Sorry for the trouble.

I greatly appreciate receiving your attractive offer every time.
I am always concerned with your offer very much, and I would like to buy it as much as possible. However, I am sorry for not make favorable reply.

Regarding SLDR, althought a type of Silver/White 460/430 10.5 degrees is popupar, a type of regular 8 degrees has not almost been sold in the last three months in my market.

修正後
#abit1

I am waiting for a refund of the JetSpeed. Sorry for the trouble.

I greatly appreciate your attractive offer every time.
I am always concerned with [word choice] your offer very much, and I would like to buy it [unclear antecedent: buy your offer?] as much as possible. However, I am sorry for not make [preposition+gerund] [articile] favorable reply.

Regarding the SLDR, althought the Silver/White 460/430 10.5 degrees is popupar [spelling], the regular type with 8 degrees has hardly sold in the last three months in my market.