翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

備考: ソフトはPCソフトウェアのことです。
ビジネスメールですのでこちらの意図が伝わるようにご翻訳頂ければと思います。
よろしくお願いします。

日本語

小売店に渡すカタログは私が日本語化します。
私もソフトを持っているので、多少の加工ができます。
日本語化までしてもらうのは申し訳ない。

チラシについても日本独自のものをこちらで作ります。
ただ、世界的に販売されていることをアピールする方が効果があるので、そちらのデザイナーさんが作ったものを利用しようかと考えている。

パッケージについてはまずは販売をスタートして、日本の顧客の意見を聞いてから考える。
そうすると問題点が見えてきてより適切な相談があなた達に出来ると思う。

英語

Regarding our catalogues handed out on retail stores, I translate it into Japanese.
Since I have software, I can add some treatment.
I feel sorry to burden you with translating into Japanese

I also will make characteristic Japanese leaflets on this side.
Since it is more effective to get retailer to see that our product have sold on global basis,
I would like to take advantage of your designer's work product.

For package, I will review it after hearing comments from Japanese customers.
I think that I can adequately consult with you because several problems becomes clear.

レビュー ( 1 )

[削除済みユーザ]はこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2014/09/30 03:03:16

元の翻訳
Regarding our catalogues handed out on retail stores, I translate it into Japanese.
Since I have software, I can add some treatment.
I feel sorry to burden you with translating into Japanese

I also will make characteristic Japanese leaflets on this side.
Since it is more effective to get retailer to see that our product have sold on global basis,
I would like to take advantage of your designer's work product.

For package, I will review it after hearing comments from Japanese customers.
I think that I can adequately consult with you because several problems becomes clear.

修正後
Regarding our catalogues handed out to retail stores, I translate it [unclear antecedent] into Japanese.
Since I also have the software, I can add some treatment [word choice].
I feel sorry to burden you with translating into Japanese.

I also will make characteristic [word choice] Japanese leaflets on this side.
Since it is more effective to get retailers to see that our product have [s-v agreement] sold on a global basis,
I would like to take advantage of your designer's work.

For packaging, I will review it after hearing comments from Japanese customers.
I think that I can adequately consult with you because several problems becomes clear.