翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

私はよく友人に、非常にactiveだといわれる。私は小中高とずっと野球を頑張っていたし、勉強も手を抜かなかった。大学に入ってからは、インドやミャンマーのNGOでボランティアをしたり、その活動を伝えるためフリーペーパーやドキュメンタリーを作った。また、インドやカンボジアのNGOの活動を伝えるチャリティイベントを開催した。交換留学生となるために大学でも常に良い成績を維持してきたし、現在はハラルビジネスをしている会社でインターンとして精力的に働いている。常に挑戦する気持ちがある。

英語

My friends often told me you are really active.
When I was elementary school ,middle school and high school students, I played the baseball and I also studied very hard.
When I started my university, I took part in many volunteering like working as NGO in India or Myanmar. Then I wanted to tell everyone about our activities so I made a poster or movie about that moreover, I held a charity event about introducing our NGO activities in India or Cambodia. And I wanted to be as an exchange students so I studied really hard .
Now, I am working as an intern on one of the bossiness company.
I always challenge up a different thing .

レビュー ( 1 )

ctplers99はこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2014/09/19 17:26:58

元の翻訳
My friends often told me you are really active.
When I was elementary school ,middle school and high school students, I played the baseball and I also studied very hard.
When I started my university, I took part in many volunteering like working as NGO in India or Myanmar. Then I wanted to tell everyone about our activities so I made a poster or movie about that moreover, I held a charity event about introducing our NGO activities in India or Cambodia. And I wanted to be as an exchange students so I studied really hard .
Now, I am working as an intern on one of the bossiness company.
I always challenge up a different thing .

修正後
My friends often told me you were really active.
When I was elementary school ,middle school and high school students, I played the baseball and I also studied very hard.
When I started my university, I took part in many volunteering like working as NGO in India or Myanmar. Then I wanted to tell everyone about our activities so I made a poster or movie about that moreover, I held a charity event about introducing our NGO activities in India or Cambodia. And I wanted to be as an exchange students so I studied really hard .
Now, I am working as an intern on one of the bossiness company.
I always challenge up a different thing .

だいたい良いと思います。