Conyacサービス終了のお知らせ

翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

評価: 37 / 1 Review / 2014/09/18 10:55:25

日本語

この度、初めての“CAP”の納品が問題なく完了しました。まずは、こころより感謝申し上げます。これから“PREFORM”の販売にも挑戦していきますので、サポートをいただけます様、これからもよろしくお願い申し上げます。

英語

Our first "CAP" was delivered correctly.
First I would like to say thank you.
We will try to sell "PREFORM" , I would like you to support for us.
Thank you.

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ixampal 52
ixampalはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2014/09/19 18:31:00

元の翻訳
Our first "CAP" was delivered correctly.
First I would like to say thank you.
We will try to sell "PREFORM" , I would like you to support for us.
Thank you.

修正後
Our first "CAP" was delivered correctly.
First, I would like to say thank you.
We will also try to sell "PREFORM" and hope to receive your support in the future.
Thank you.

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