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日本語

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manufacturerを変えたんですね。
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よろしくお願いします。

英語

My e-mail address has been restored and now I can receive a message.Sorry for the inconvenience.

You changed manufacturer.
Thanks for your quality Improvement.
Signed invoice will be attached this message.
I will pay in a few days,I will let you know when I finished.
And I will let you know the account number of Courrier in a few days.
Thank you.

レビュー ( 1 )

[削除済みユーザ]はこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2014/08/07 09:26:34

元の翻訳
My e-mail address has been restored and now I can receive a message.Sorry for the inconvenience.

You changed manufacturer.
Thanks for your quality Improvement.
Signed invoice will be attached this message.
I will pay in a few days,I will let you know when I finished.
And I will let you know the account number of Courrier in a few days.
Thank you.

修正後
My e-mail address has been restored and now I can receive a message.Sorry for the inconvenience.

You changed [article?] manufacturer.
Thanks for your quality Improvement.
[article missing] Signed invoice will be attached this message [why passive voice?].
I will pay in a few days, [comma splice] I will let you know when I finished [tense confusion].
And I will let you know the account number of Courrier [spelling] in a few days.
Thank you.

[futomomo]

Thank you so much for your review,I will make that a reference for the future. Thanks.