翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

イケメンたちと、ちょっと危険でスリル満点な恋をしてみませんか？
あなたが恋するのは、執事ですか？それとも上司ですか？
◆ストーリー◆
普通の市民であるあなたは、ある日突然、セレブになる。
そんなあなたは、執事や会社の上司たちに言い寄られ、いつのまにか恋に落ちてしまう。
◆楽しみ方◆
このアプリは、
イケメン達に愛されながら、特定のカレとの愛を育てていくというストーリーの
恋愛ドラマアプリです。
◆ドラマチックなイラスト◆
ストーリーを盛り上げるイラストが多数登場！

英語

Don’t you wanna have dangerous and thrilling affair with good-looking guys?

Is the person who you’ll fall in love a butler or your boss?
◆story◆
One day, you (who are ordinary citizen) will turn into celebrity all of the sudden.
You’ll fall in love with the guys like a butler and your boss after they keep hitting on you.
◆how to play◆
This app. is love drama app. which you are desired by all the good-looking guys and you’ll find the very special one for you then you’ll grow love with him.
◆dramatic image◆
There are so many images that heat the story up.

レビュー ( 1 )

[削除済みユーザ]はこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2014/05/26 11:48:44

元の翻訳
Don’t you wanna have dangerous and thrilling affair with good-looking guys?

Is the person who you’ll fall in love a butler or your boss?
◆story◆
One day, you (who are ordinary citizen) will turn into celebrity all of the sudden.
You’ll fall in love with the guys like a butler and your boss after they keep hitting on you.
◆how to play◆
This app. is love drama app. which you are desired by all the good-looking guys and you’ll find the very special one for you then you’ll grow love with him.
◆dramatic image◆
There are so many images that heat the story up.

修正後
Don’t you want to have dangerous and thrilling affairs with good-looking guys?

Is the person who you’ll fall in love with a butler or your boss?
◆Story◆
One day, you (who are an ordinary citizen) will turn into a celebrity all of the sudden.
You’ll fall in love with guys like a butler and your boss after they keep hitting on you.
◆How to play◆
This app is a love drama app in which you are desired by all the good-looking guys and you’ll find the very special one for you then you’ll grow love with him.
◆Dramatic image◆
There are so many images that heat the story up.

[h-gruenberg]

内容がちょっとnaughty だったのでわざとwannaにしました。もちろん絶対に誰かに修正されるだろうと思いかなり悩みましたが。後は細かなミスだけで内容に大きなな違えもないのに3星は厳しすぎませんか？