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日本語

書籍紹介：イベント・旅行産業にも言及


叢文社は、4月7日「図表で見るスポーツビジネス」を発行した。

編著者は、佐野昌行氏（日本体育大学 助教）、黒田次郎氏（近畿大学 准教授）、遠藤利文氏（スポーツデータバンク 代表取締役）の3氏。

“スポーツ産業にはどのような領域があるのか”、“産業規模はどの程度か”、“スポーツ産業におけるビジネスの仕組みは”といった疑問に3氏のほか、スポーツ科学の分野の研究者とスポーツ産業で活躍する実務家ら多彩な執筆陣が答える内容となっており、6部22章で構成。

英語

Introduction of books: reference to event and sightseeing industry.

Sobunsha published "Sports business by looking figure and chart" in 7th April.

Editors are Mr.Masayuki Sano (Nippon college of Physical Education Research Associate),Mr.Jiro Kuroda (Kinki university Associate professor). and Mr Toshihumi Endo (Sports Data Bank president).

In addition to above three person, resercher in sphere related with sports science ,athlete activating in sports industry will answer the question such as "What is domain in sports industry", "How big industry scale is", "How is business mechanism in sports industry " The congress is consisted of 6 section and 22 chapter.

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[削除済みユーザ]はこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2014/05/16 20:21:57

どういう添削がいいか思いつかずすみません。でも読みづらさを少し感じてしまったので、４にさせていただきます。

[削除済みユーザ]はこの翻訳結果を"★★"と評価しました 2014/05/17 05:46:12

元の翻訳
Introduction of books: reference to event and sightseeing industry.

Sobunsha published "Sports business by looking figure and chart" in 7th April.

Editors are Mr.Masayuki Sano (Nippon college of Physical Education Research Associate),Mr.Jiro Kuroda (Kinki university Associate professor). and Mr Toshihumi Endo (Sports Data Bank president).

In addition to above three person, resercher in sphere related with sports science ,athlete activating in sports industry will answer the question such as "What is domain in sports industry", "How big industry scale is", "How is business mechanism in sports industry " The congress is consisted of 6 section and 22 chapter.

修正後
Book introduction: reference to event and sightseeing industry.

Sobunsha published "Sports Business with Figures and Charts" on April 7.

Editors are Mr. Masayuki Sano (Research Associate, Nippon Sport Science University), Mr. Jiro Kuroda (Associate Professor, Kinki University) and Mr. Toshihumi Endo (Sports Data Bank president).

In addition to above three person [singular vs. plural], resercher [spelling] in fields related to sports science, athlete activating in sports industry will answer the question such as "What is domain in sports industry?", "How big industry scale is?", "How is business mechanism in sports industry?" The congress [word choice] consists of 6 sections and 22 chapters.

Various grammatical mistakes.