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日本語

１９７８年のエネルギー供給量は１９７３年から５％ほど増えたものの、石油依存度は低下した。エネルギー供給量の内訳では、一次電力と天然ガスの増加が目立つ。原子力発電は１９７８年には１３地点で行われ、発電電力量の10.5%を占めていた。1965年に設置された通産大臣の諮問機関である総合エネルギー調査会は答申を二回出し、1970年に出された第二次答申では1975年のエネルギー供給予測を上方修正した。この予測は石油危機を織り込んでいなかったため、現実の数値とは大きく異なることとなった。

英語

The amount of supplying energy in 1978 had increased by about 5% since 1973, but the dependency of oil got lower. The increase of the first electricity and natural gas is particular about consisting items of the supplying amount of energy. Making electricity by nuclear power was done in 13 places and the electricity occupied 10.5% of produced electricity in 1978. A general energy research committee that was an organization for inquires by the Minister of International Trade and Industry created in 1965 submitted answers twice, and they made corrections to their anticipation of energy supply for 1975 for ups in the latter submission of answers created in 1970. They didn't consider the oil crisis in this anticipation, so it got to be very different from the actual numbers.

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元の翻訳
The amount of supplying energy in 1978 had increased by about 5% since 1973, but the dependency of oil got lower. The increase of the first electricity and natural gas is particular about consisting items of the supplying amount of energy. Making electricity by nuclear power was done in 13 places and the electricity occupied 10.5% of produced electricity in 1978. A general energy research committee that was an organization for inquires by the Minister of International Trade and Industry created in 1965 submitted answers twice, and they made corrections to their anticipation of energy supply for 1975 for ups in the latter submission of answers created in 1970. They didn't consider the oil crisis in this anticipation, so it got to be very different from the actual numbers.

修正後
Although the amount of energy supply in 1978 had increased by about 5% since 1973, the dependency of oil got lower. When it comes to the breakdown of the amount of energy supply, the increase in the first electricity and natural gas is noticeable. Nuclear power generation was available in 13 places, occupying 10.5% of national power generation in 1978. A general energy research committee that was an organization for inquires by the Minister of International Trade and Industry established in 1965 submitted answers twice. In the second submission in 1970, they announced upward revision of energy supply for 1975. Because they didn't consider the oil crisis in this prediction, the data largely deviated from the actual data.

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