翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

お忙しい中、入荷のご連絡ありがとうございます。
クレジットカードに変更はありません。

Cemetery ring size 10の注文お願いします。

Fedexで商品の発送が完了したら、
追跡番号と発送完了のご連絡をお願いします。

今回も、とても良い状態のリングが届くのを楽しみにお待ちしています。

英語

Thank you very much for noticing me.
There is not change regarding to the credit card info.

I would like to order Cemetery ring size 10.

Please let me know when the shipment is completed by Fedex with tracking number.

I look forward to the ring with good condition as usual.

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natsukioはこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2014/05/05 22:24:31

元の翻訳
Thank you very much for noticing me.
There is not change regarding to the credit card info.

I would like to order Cemetery ring size 10.

Please let me know when the shipment is completed by Fedex with tracking number.

I look forward to the ring with good condition as usual.

修正後
Thank you very much for contacting me.
There is no change regarding to the credit card info.

I would like to order a Cemetery ring size 10.

Please let me know when the shipment is completed by Fedex with a tracking number.

I look forward to the ring in good condition as usual.