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日本語

販売復権のお願い


私はいくつかの問題点を確認しました。
ネガティブフィードバック、A-to-Zクレームの撲滅を目指すため改善販売計画を提出します。今後は継続してOrder Defect Rateの1％以下のキープを全力で目指します。
私は今まで以上に顧客満足度をあげることに全力で取り組みます。
ご確認をお願いできますでしょうか。
よろしくお願い致します。

英語

Request for reinstatement of selling rights

I have confirmed some problem points.
I will submit a sales improvement plan to eliminate negative feedback and A-to-Z claims. I will aim and do my best to keep the Order Defect Rate below 1%.
I will be doing my best in raising the customer's satisfaction level more than ever.
So can I ask for your confirmation?
Thank you very much.

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jojoはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2014/05/02 17:38:22

元の翻訳
Request for reinstatement of selling rights

I have confirmed some problem points.
I will submit a sales improvement plan to eliminate negative feedback and A-to-Z claims. I will aim and do my best to keep the Order Defect Rate below 1%.
I will be doing my best in raising the customer's satisfaction level more than ever.
So can I ask for your confirmation?
Thank you very much.

修正後
Request for recovering of selling rights

I have confirmed some problem points.
I will submit a sales improvement plan to eliminate negative feedback and A-to-Z claims. I will try my best to keep the Order Defect Rate below 1%.
I will do my best to raise the customer satisfaction more than ever.
So can I ask for your confirmation?
Thank you very much.