翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

評価: 50 / 1 Review / 2014/04/30 20:17:18

sujiko
sujiko 50 IT、金融などを中心として社内翻訳者を数年経験後、フリーランス翻訳者として...
日本語

戦争記念館の見学時間があと1時間ぐらいあると自分にとってはパーフェクトでしたが、それ以外の点では十分に楽しめました。
JSAツアーは同意書が必要で危険と思われがちですが基本的には安全であり、また現場に行くことで歴史を肌身に感じることができ大変珍しいツアーだと思います。
JSA区域内の行動は韓国軍の監視下に置かれますのでどのツアー会社も同じと思います。
バスに乗り遅れるリスクを考えると、余裕をもって行動したかったので、前夜遊んで朝ゆっくり起きたい方は是非ともKTBで申し込むべきです。

英語

It was perfect if we could have 1 more hour to see the War Memorial Hall.
However, other than that, I enjoyed it to the fullest.

People tend to think that JSA tour is dangerous because we need a letter of consent
for the tour.
But it is basically safe, and it is a very rare tour where we can feel history by visiting the sightseeing spot.

The activity within JSA area is monitored by South Korean army, and this situation
is the same by all tour companies.

By considering the risk that I might be late for the bus, I wanted to act by having enough time.
I recommend that those who have fun in the previous evening and want to get up late in the next morning shpuld appy to KTB.

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[削除済みユーザ]はこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2014/05/02 18:27:03

元の翻訳
It was perfect if we could have 1 more hour to see the War Memorial Hall.
However, other than that, I enjoyed it to the fullest.

People tend to think that JSA tour is dangerous because we need a letter of consent
for the tour.
But it is basically safe, and it is a very rare tour where we can feel history by visiting the sightseeing spot.

The activity within JSA area is monitored by South Korean army, and this situation
is the same by all tour companies.

By considering the risk that I might be late for the bus, I wanted to act by having enough time.
I recommend that those who have fun in the previous evening and want to get up late in the next morning shpuld appy to KTB.

修正後
For me, it would be perfect if we could have had 1 more hour to see the War Memorial Hall.
However, other than that, I enjoyed it to the fullest.

People tend to think that JSA tour is dangerous because we need a letter of consent
for the tour.
But it is basically safe, and it is a very rare tour where we can feel history by visiting the sightseeing spot.

The activity within JSA area is monitored by South Korean army, and this situation
is the same by all tour companies.

By considering the risk that I might be late for the bus, I wanted to act by having enough time.
I recommend that those who have fun in the previous evening and want to get up late in the next morning shpuld appy to KTB.

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