翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

＜充実した1日でした＞

友人と英語ツアーに参加しました。想像以上にどこも素敵な街で、時間が全然足りずフリータイムはめいっぱい大急ぎで観光しました。急ぎ足になってしまったのは残念だけど、1日で3箇所も観光できて充実の1日でした。もっと長期滞在できる旅行であれば、ウィンザーで1日、バースでも1日ゆったり過ごしたいくらいです。

英語

<It was a productive day>

I joined the English tour with friend. All the towns were more lovely than I expected. We didn't have enough time so we did sightseeting during the free time in a big hurry. It is shame that we had to hurry, but it was a productive day because we could visit as many as three places. If we could stay longer, we'd like to spend a day in Windsor and a day in Bath in a relaxed way.

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chee_madamはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2014/04/24 23:01:19

元の翻訳
<It was a productive day>

I joined the English tour with friend. All the towns were more lovely than I expected. We didn't have enough time so we did sightseeting during the free time in a big hurry. It is shame that we had to hurry, but it was a productive day because we could visit as many as three places. If we could stay longer, we'd like to spend a day in Windsor and a day in Bath in a relaxed way.

修正後
<It was a productive day>

I joined the English tour with my friend. All the towns visited were lovelier than I expected. We didn't have enough time so we did sightseeing during the free time in a big hurry. It is a shame that we had to hurry, but it was a productive day because we could visit as many as three places in one day. If we could stay longer, we'd like to spend a day in Windsor and a day in Bath in a relaxed way.