翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

#golf Xcess

返金ができない旨、了解致しました。
次回使用できるお金としておとり置きをお願いします。

#Myus

商品価額の記載のあるPaypalの請求書を提出しましたが、なぜ価額変更が必要なのでしょうか？
日本の顧客を待たせていますので、なるべく早く出荷していただけると助かります。

英語

#golf Xcess

I understood the situation that you can not refund.
Please keep it as the money you can use for next time.

#Myus

I did submit the PayPal invoice that says the price if the items, but why does it have to change the price?
I am keeping Japanese customers waiting, I would be grateful if you ship as soon as possible.

レビュー ( 2 )

yakuokはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★★"と評価しました 2014/04/04 03:18:09

元の翻訳
#golf Xcess

I understood the situation that you can not refund.
Please keep it as the money you can use for next time.

#Myus

I did submit the PayPal invoice that says the price if the items, but why does it have to change the price?
I am keeping Japanese customers waiting, I would be grateful if you ship as soon as possible.

修正後
#golf Xcess

I understood that that you cannot refund.
Please keep it and use it next time.

#Myus

I did submit the PayPal invoice that shows the price of the items, but why does the price have to be changed?
I am keeping my Japanese customers waiting, so I would be grateful if you would ship the parcels out as soon as possible.

[yakuok]

途中で投稿を押してしまいました ^^;
文1行目、「I understood that you cannot refund. 」です。失礼致しました。

[削除済みユーザ]はこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2014/04/04 08:00:03

元の翻訳
#golf Xcess

I understood the situation that you can not refund.
Please keep it as the money you can use for next time.

#Myus

I did submit the PayPal invoice that says the price if the items, but why does it have to change the price?
I am keeping Japanese customers waiting, I would be grateful if you ship as soon as possible.

修正後
#Golf Xcess

It's fine that you can not refund.
Please keep it and use it for the next time.

#MyUs

I submitted a PayPal invoice with product prices, but why do I need to change the prices?
I am keeping my Japanese customers waiting, [comma splice] I would be grateful if you could ship as soon as possible.

[14pon]

お邪魔いたします。「おとり置き」のところ、どちら様も、そのお金は相手方が使えるように解釈していらっしゃいますが、「返金してもらえないなら置いといてください」ですから、あとで「私」が使うお金です。前後の関連にも注意して訳しましょう。

[14pon]

レビューも原文をまったく見ないと、原文の取り違いを見逃しますよ、Tocchanさま？