翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

備考: "東方神起はTOHOSHINKIとしてください
全角文字は半角文字に置き換えてください。"

日本語

※全てコピー及び期限切れは不可。
※顔写真付き住民基本台帳カードは年齢問わず取得できます。（住民基本台帳カードHP　http://juki-card.com/）
※顔写真付き身分証明書をお持ちでない方は、お住まいの市区町村の窓口にて写真付き住民基本台帳カードを取得してください。発行までにお時間がかかる場合もございますので、イベント開催日まで余裕を持ってお手続きください。
※上記｢顔写真付き身分証明書｣お持ちでない方は、ご入場頂けませんので、ご注意ください。

英語

* All copied or expired ID is not acceptable.
* You can obtain Basic Resident Register card with a head shot at any age.
(Basic Resident Register card's HP http://juki-card.com/)
* If you do not have ID with a head shot photo, please go to the council of your residential area and obtain Basic Resident Register card with a head photo.
* Please note that you can not enter the site if you don 't have an ID with a head shot photo.

レビュー ( 1 )

mshimokawa-129はこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2014/03/26 06:40:13

元の翻訳
* All copied or expired ID is not acceptable.
* You can obtain Basic Resident Register card with a head shot at any age.↵
(Basic Resident Register card's HP http://juki-card.com/)
* If you do not have ID with a head shot photo, please go to the council of your residential area and obtain Basic Resident Register card with a head photo.
* Please note that you can not enter the site if you don 't have an ID with a head shot photo.

修正後
* No photocopied or expired IDs are accepted.
* You can obtain a Basic Resident Register Card with a head shot at any age. (Website for Basic Resident Register Cards: http://juki-card.com/)
* If you do not have a photo ID, please go to your local government office and obtain a Basic Resident Register Card with a head shot. Please apply for your card well in advance before the event, as it may take long for the local government to↵
issue it.
* Please note that you cannot enter the site if you don 't have a photo ID as described above.

・copyとphotocopyの違いに気をつけてください。
・acceptableは価値判断を含む言葉なので、この場合はacceptedのほうが適切です。
・「ホームページ」や「HP」は和製英語で、websiteと言い直すほうが良いです。

[honeylemon003]

丁寧な説明ありがとうございます。勉強になります。