翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )
評価: 52 / 1 Review / 2014/02/28 01:03:54
いけないことなの?
したい、でも、できない
心が弾けてしまいそうで
ねぇ、先生
この壁が何のためにあるのか教えて
わたしが、飛び越えないように?
子供じゃいられないよ
ねぇ、先生
この壁が何のためにあるのか 教えるね
「誰にも聞かれちゃわないように」
小さい声で伝える
Partition Love
Is that bad ?
I want you but I can't
my heart is going to burst
dear my teacher
tell me the reason why this wall exists
so that I cannot jump accross?
I cannot be a child anymore
my teacher
I will tell you the reason why this wall exists
in a low voice
" so that no one hear me"
Partition Love
レビュー ( 1 )
元の翻訳
Is that bad ?
I want you but I can't
my heart is going to burst
dear my teacher
tell me the reason why this wall exists
so that I cannot jump accross?
I cannot be a child anymore
my teacher
I will tell you the reason why this wall exists
in a low voice
" so that no one hear me"
Partition Love
修正後
Is that bad ?
I want but I can't
my heart is going to burst
Dear my teacher
tell me why this wall exists
so that I can't jump across?
I can't be a child anymore
My teacher
I will tell you why this wall exists
in a low voice
"so that no one can hear me"
Partition Love
Thank you so much for the review. It's very kind of you to correct my errors.