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翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

評価: 52 / 1 Review / 2014/02/28 01:03:54

日本語

いけないことなの?
したい、でも、できない
心が弾けてしまいそうで

ねぇ、先生
この壁が何のためにあるのか教えて
わたしが、飛び越えないように?
子供じゃいられないよ

ねぇ、先生
この壁が何のためにあるのか 教えるね
「誰にも聞かれちゃわないように」
小さい声で伝える

Partition Love

英語

Is that bad ?
I want you but I can't
my heart is going to burst

dear my teacher
tell me the reason why this wall exists
so that I cannot jump accross?
I cannot be a child anymore

my teacher
I will tell you the reason why this wall exists
in a low voice
" so that no one hear me"

Partition Love

レビュー ( 1 )

[削除済みユーザ] 44
[削除済みユーザ]はこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2014/02/28 02:59:00

元の翻訳
Is that bad ?
I want you but I can't
my heart is going to burst

dear my teacher
tell me the reason why this wall exists
so that I cannot jump accross?
I cannot be a child anymore

my teacher
I will tell you the reason why this wall exists
in a low voice
" so that no one hear me"

Partition Love

修正後
Is that bad ?
I want but I can't
my heart is going to burst

Dear my teacher
tell me why this wall exists
so that I can't jump across?
I can't be a child anymore

My teacher
I will tell you why this wall exists
in a low voice
"so that no one can hear me"

Partition Love

yukari0101 yukari0101 2014/02/28 09:04:24

Thank you so much for the review. It's very kind of you to correct my errors.

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