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日本語

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献血に親しみが湧きます

クリスマスシーズンのお祭りは、『おかやま桃太郎まつり （MOMOTAROH　FANTASY）』
岡山の冬を代表するイルミネーションイベント

夜になると、美しいイルミネーションあふれる街に。
クリスマスツリーにも『桃』をあしらうのが岡山流

「桃から生まれた桃太郎」をイルミネーションで表現

お土産はもちろん桃太郎が腰につけていたきびだんご
土産物売り場は「きびだんご」であふれています。
きびだんご専門サイトによると、きびだんごの種類は70以上あるとか

英語

It makes blood donation seem easily accessible.

A festival during the Christmas season iis the "Okayama Momotaro Matsuri (MOMOTAROH FANTASY)", the most well-known illumination event in Okayama during the winter season.

At night, the town will be filled with beautiful illumination lights.
Christmas trees in Okayama are decorated with "peaches."

Illumination lights are positioned and composed to shape "Momotarou, the boy born from the peach."

The most famous souvenir that fills souvenir shops is of course the Kibi-dango.
According to a website specializing in Kibi-dango, there are more than 70 different types of Kibi-dango.

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kiijimakaiはこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2014/02/24 13:40:55

元の翻訳
It makes blood donation seem easily accessible.

A festival during the Christmas season iis the "Okayama Momotaro Matsuri (MOMOTAROH FANTASY)", the most well-known illumination event in Okayama during the winter season.

At night, the town will be filled with beautiful illumination lights.
Christmas trees in Okayama are decorated with "peaches."

Illumination lights are positioned and composed to shape "Momotarou, the boy born from the peach."

The most famous souvenir that fills souvenir shops is of course the Kibi-dango.
According to a website specializing in Kibi-dango, there are more than 70 different types of Kibi-dango.

修正後
It makes blood donation familiar.

A festival during the Christmas season iis the "Okayama Momotaro Matsuri (MOMOTAROH FANTASY)", the most well-known illumination event in Okayama during the winter season.

At night, the town will be filled with beautiful illumination lights.
Christmas trees in Okayama are decorated with "peaches."

Illumination lights are positioned and composed to shape "Momotarou, the boy born from the peach."

The most famous souvenir that fills souvenir shops is of course the Kibi-dango.
According to the website specializing in Kibi-dango, there are more than 70 types of Kibi-dango.

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