翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

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英語

We have inventories as follows and you are able to order them.
You can pay through paypal. Currency of payment are fixed to Yen.
We can send them to both Poland and America by EMS.
The postage depends on their weight.
From about 3,000-5,000 yen payment of postage would be needed.
In addition, you may be needed to pay for their tariffs.
Because the way of order doesn't correspond to shipping to foreign countries by means of website, please contact with us by replying this E-mail with the necessary information below.
After confirming, we will tell you the price of goods, the postage, and the necessary information for the payment of paypal.
Confirming your payment, we will send goods.

レビュー ( 1 )

norrytkはこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2014/02/18 05:55:44

元の翻訳
We have inventories as follows and you are able to order them.
You can pay through paypal. Currency of payment are fixed to Yen.
We can send them to both Poland and America by EMS.
The postage depends on their weight.
From about 3,000-5,000 yen payment of postage would be needed.
In addition, you may be needed to pay for their tariffs.
Because the way of order doesn't correspond to shipping to foreign countries by means of website, please contact with us by replying this E-mail with the necessary information below.
After confirming, we will tell you the price of goods, the postage, and the necessary information for the payment of paypal.
Confirming your payment, we will send goods.

修正後
We have the following items available in stock and you are able to order them.
You can pay through paypal. Currency of payment are fixed to Yen.
We can send them to both Poland and America by EMS.
The postage depends on their weight.
From about 3,000-5,000 yen would be needed for the postage.
In addition, you may need to pay for the custom duties in your country.
Because the way of order doesn't correspond to shipping to foreign countries by means of website, please contact with us by replying this E-mail with the necessary information below.
After confirming, we will tell you the price of goods, the postage, and the necessary information for the payment of paypal.
Confirming your payment, we will send goods.

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レビューありがとうございます。
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