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日本語

今日のメイクはどうでしょうか？

結構自分でもメイクを足したんですけど
やっているうちに、いつもの自分じゃない感じがしてきて
入り込んでる気がします

でもちょっと目が開けられないです
目を開けると女の子になっちゃう
しかも、グロスみたいなものを目に塗ったんですよ
テカテカさせる為に
そしたら瞬きがめっちゃ重くて


リーダーとして今回のダンスはどうでしょうか？

皆が筋肉を使って踊らないと揃わないし
バラつきが目立っちゃうから


◯◯自身のダンスはどうですか？

ずっと女の子のダンスを踊ってきたから

英語

What do I look with today's makeup?
I added some makeups by myself and it doesn't look like as I am.

But I can't open my eyes because I'll be more girl.
What's more, I put gloss on my lips, which makes my lips glitter.
Then my eye blinks are heavier.

How did I look like as a leader of today's dance?
We need to dance with muscles so that we can bring harmony to avoid to be viverse.
What do you think about ⚪︎⚪︎'s dance?
I think I have been dancing as a girl for a long time.

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[削除済みユーザ]はこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2014/02/14 23:45:06

元の翻訳
What do I look with today's makeup?
I added some makeups by myself and it doesn't look like as I am.

But I can't open my eyes because I'll be more girl.
What's more, I put gloss on my lips, which makes my lips glitter.
Then my eye blinks are heavier.

How did I look like as a leader of today's dance?
We need to dance with muscles so that we can bring harmony to avoid to be viverse.
What do you think about ⚪︎⚪︎'s dance?
I think I have been dancing as a girl for a long time.

修正後
How do I look with today's makeup?
I added some makeup by myself and it doesn't look like me.

But I can't open my eyes because I'll be more feminine.
What's more, I put gloss on my lips, which makes them glitter.
Then my eyelids are heavier.

How did I look like as a leader of today's dance?
We need to dance with muscles so that we can bring harmony to avoid to be viverse.
What do you think about ⚪︎⚪︎'s dance?
I have been dancing girls' dance for a long time.

[yuko_kubodera]

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