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ピンクと水色の組み合わせがメルヘン。
Melty Cream ドーナツShopへようこそ！ メニューにはCreamyでSweetな、おいしいドーナツでいっぱい☆
angelicprettyのドーナツ柄はAラインでカジュアルにも着こなせちゃう♪
人気のチョコレート柄には茶色の小物を合わせてみて♪
不思議の国のアリスみたいなエプロン付きワンピ。
アリス気分でティーパーティーに参加しよう♪
お菓子とクマのコラボ♪は最強にカワイイ！！
The combination of pink and light blue look like it is in a fairy tale.
Welcome to Melty Cream Doughnut shop!
Please find your favorite one in those creamy and sweet doughnuts.
You can dress up casual too with the A line doughnut pattern dress designed by angelicpretty♪
Try brown accessories with those everyone’s favorite chocolate designs.
The one-piece will make you as if you are in “Alice in wonderland”.
So, let’s do party♪
In collaboration with sweets and bear will be the best!!
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元の翻訳
The combination of pink and light blue look like it is in a fairy tale.
Welcome to Melty Cream Doughnut shop!
Please find your favorite one in those creamy and sweet doughnuts.
You can dress up casual too with the A line doughnut pattern dress designed by angelicpretty♪
Try brown accessories with those everyone’s favorite chocolate designs.
The one-piece will make you as if you are in “Alice in wonderland”.
So, let’s do party♪
In collaboration with sweets and bear will be the best!!↵
修正後
The combination of pink and light blue have a fairy-tale atmosphere.
Welcome to Melty Cream Doughnut shop!
You will find a plenty of tasty doughnuts, they are Creamy and Sweet, in our menu☆
You can wear casual with an A-line angelicpretty with a doughnut pattern♪
Try brown accessories with its popular chocolate pattern♪
The one-piece with an apron will make you feel as if you are “Alice in wonderland."
Let’s go to a party in a mood that you are Alice♪
A collaboration of sweets and bear is the cutest ever!!
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