翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

評価: 52 / ネイティブ 日本語 / 1 Review / 2014/02/06 14:29:57

kiriyama_jun
kiriyama_jun 52 20年以上、ビジネス、プライベート両面で英語でのコミニュケーション経験があ...
日本語

AAAのリリースはいつ頃になりそうですか?
リリース自体に何か問題はありましたか?
価格や技術的な問題がある場合は教えてください。

AAAがリリースされたらあなたの他の製品もう購入したいと考えています。
急かせるようなメールで申し訳ありません。

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次のアップデートをいつぐらいになりそうですか?
最初に表示する国を指定できるようになれば購入したいと考えています。

要望としては広告を追加できたり、もう少しSEO-friendlyだと最高ですね。
ただ使い勝手はかなり良いですね。

英語

Could you inform when will AAA likely be released?
Is there any problem with releasing the product?
Please let me know if there's any technical or pricing issue.

Once AAA is out, I would like to purchase your other products as well.
Sorry for pushing you on this.

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Could you tell me when do you plan to release the next update?
I wish to buy one if it allows me to designate the default country. (which shows up when I start)

It might be better if I can add some more ads, and if it's a bit more SEO-friendly.
However, in overall, it is quite well designed and very comfortable to use.

レビュー ( 1 )

tani1973 50 I spare no effort to offer quality tr...
tani1973はこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2014/02/06 14:58:42

元の翻訳
Could you inform when will AAA likely be released?
Is there any problem with releasing the product?
Please let me know if there's any technical or pricing issue.

Once AAA is out, I would like to purchase your other products as well.
Sorry for pushing you on this.

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Could you tell me when do you plan to release the next update?
I wish to buy one if it allows me to designate the default country. (which shows up when I start)

It might be better if I can add some more ads, and if it's a bit more SEO-friendly.
However, in overall, it is quite well designed and very comfortable to use.

修正後
Could you inform me of when AAA will be released?
Is there any problem with releasing the product?
Please let me know if there's any technical or pricing issue.

Once AAA is out, I would like to purchase your other products as well.
Sorry for pushing you on this.

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Could you tell me when do you plan to release the next update?
I wish to buy one if it allows me to designate the default country. (which shows up when I start)

It might be better if I can add some more ads, and if it's a bit more SEO-friendly.
However, in overall, it is quite well designed and very comfortable to use.

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