翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

評価: 52 / 3 Reviews / 2013/12/24 18:46:32

linga_2
linga_2 52 IT系文書、ホームページ翻訳が得意です。 法律、経済、情報技術の背景的知...
日本語

御社もご存知の通り我々は既に日本国内での展示会などのプロモーションを開始している。
さらに我々は御社から315.5MhzのTPMSを購入するための予算を確保しているが実際に必要な費用が大きい場合は別の手段を考える必要がある。

弊社は日本市場は2014年にTPMS市場が大きく成長すると分析している。そして日本のTPMS潜在市場はとても巨大です。
御社はこのタイミングで巨大な日本市場にチャレンジする意思はどのくらいありますな?
トップ経営陣とよく話し合った上で、御社の考えを教えてほしい。

英語

As you know, we already started promotion activity such as exhibition within Japan.
Additionally, although we have secured budget to purchase TPMS that is 315.5Mhz from you, we need to think about another means when we cost is too high that is actually needed.

As for Japanese market, we analyze that TPMS market will grow drastically in 2014. And Japanese potential TPMS market is huge.
How strongly do you wish to challenge this huge Japanese market?
Please let us know about your idea after consulting with your management team well.

レビュー ( 3 )

white_elephant 52 手数料をご負担願えればありがたいです。
white_elephantはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2013/12/24 19:23:13

we cost >it costs us

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premiumdotz 53 I am a graduate of Teacher Education ...
premiumdotzはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★★"と評価しました 2013/12/24 20:14:20

good

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russ87 68
russ87はこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2014/01/26 17:19:35

元の翻訳
As you know, we already started promotion activity such as exhibition within Japan.
Additionally, although we have secured budget to purchase TPMS that is 315.5Mhz from you, we need to think about another means when we cost is too high that is actually needed.

As for Japanese market, we analyze that TPMS market will grow drastically in 2014. And Japanese potential TPMS market is huge.
How strongly do you wish to challenge this huge Japanese market?
Please let us know about your idea after consulting with your management team well.

修正後
As you know, we have already started our promotions including exhibitions within Japan.
Additionally, although we have secured the budget to purchase TPMS at 315.5Mhz from you, we need to think about another means for when the actual necessary expenses are very high.

As for the Japanese market, our analysis shows that the TPMS market will grow dramatically in 2014, and so the potential in the Japanese TPMS market is huge.
How keen are is your company in taking on this huge Japanese market with the current timing?
Please let us know your thoughts after carefully consulting with your management team.

No critical errors but some room for improvement

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