翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

#william
大変迅速な対応をありがとうございます。
発送後、追跡番号を教えていただけると嬉しいです。
日本の顧客にあなたの商品を紹介します。

#habit
18日にそちらに返品商品が到着致しました。
お手数をおかけしますが、準備ができましたら
ご返金手続きを宜しくお願い致します。

英語

# william
Thank you for your very quick response.
Please let me know the tracking number after shipping.
I will introduce your goods to customers in Japan.

# habit
The products which is returned arrived there on the 18th.
We apologize for the incovenience.
Thank you for your refund procedure as soon as preparations have been made.

レビュー ( 3 )

chee_madamはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2013/12/20 09:42:00

そちらに到着いたしました、の部分は、You have received the returned products on the 18th. でもいいかもしれません。Thereというと、日本語では「そこ、そちら」ですが、メッセージの受け側としては、わかりづらいのかと思います。以上、僭越ながらコメントさせていただきました。

[rasinblancs]

コメントどうもありがとうございます。発想の転換の仕方が参考になりました。頑張ります。

tani1973はこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2013/12/20 10:00:36

元の翻訳
# william
Thank you for your very quick response.
Please let me know the tracking number after shipping.
I will introduce your goods to customers in Japan.

# habit
The products which is returned arrived there on the 18th.
We apologize for the incovenience.
Thank you for your refund procedure as soon as preparations have been made.

修正後
# william
Thank you for your very quick response.
Please let me know the tracking number after shipping.
I will introduce your goods to customers in Japan.

# habit
The return arrived at your place on the 18th.
We apologize for the incovenience.
Could you please proceed with a refund once it's ready?

The products which is returned arrived there
isが間違っています。
返品の品を表現するときはreturnだけで通じます。
「そちら」は「そこ」と意味が違います。

[rasinblancs]

添削どうもありがとうございます。返品商品という表現覚えておきます。

[削除済みユーザ]はこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2013/12/20 15:05:59

元の翻訳
# william
Thank you for your very quick response.
Please let me know the tracking number after shipping.
I will introduce your goods to customers in Japan.

# habit
The products which is returned arrived there on the 18th.
We apologize for the incovenience.
Thank you for your refund procedure as soon as preparations have been made.

修正後
# william
Thank you for your very quick response.
Please let me know the tracking number after shipping.
I will introduce your goods to customers in Japan.

[Great]↵
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# habit
The products which is returned ["products" -- plural, "is" -- singular] arrived there on the 18th.
We apologize for the incovenience.
Thank you for your refund procedure [awkward] as soon as preparations have been made [?].