翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

在庫切れのため注文をキャンセルさせていただいたのですが、こちらの手違いでした。
在庫切れではなくつい先日、そちらに商品の発送をしております。
ただし注文自体はこちらの方からキャンセルさせていただいるため、料金の請求はありません。

以下２つどちらかの対応をお願いできないでしょうか。

①再度同じ値段で注文をしていただく。こちらを選んでいただいた場合、後ほど注文するための商品ページのリンクをお送りいたします。

②商品の受け取り拒否をしていただく。拒否していただいたあとはこちらに返送されます。

英語

We have canceled your order as the item was out of stock, however, it was our mistake.
It was not out of stock, but we have already shipped the item.
The payment has not been charged yet because we canceled the order.

Could you please choose one of these options below?

1. Reorder the same item at the same price. If you choose this, we will send a link to the page of the item to order later on.

2. Reject the package of the item. The package will be returend to us.

レビュー ( 1 )

tani1973はこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2013/11/13 11:58:08

元の翻訳
We have canceled your order as the item was out of stock, however, it was our mistake.
It was not out of stock, but we have already shipped the item.
The payment has not been charged yet because we canceled the order.

Could you please choose one of these options below?

1. Reorder the same item at the same price. If you choose this, we will send a link to the page of the item to order later on.

2. Reject the package of the item. The package will be returend to us.

修正後
We have canceled your order as the item was out of stock, however, it was our mistake.
It was not out of stock, so we have already shipped the item.
The payment has not been charged yet because we canceled the order.

Could you please choose one of these options below?

1. Reorder the same item at the same price. If you choose this, we will send a link to the item for you to to order later on.

2. Reject the package of the item. The package will be returend to us.

butよりsoの方が文脈的に適切かと思いました。

[[削除済みユーザ]]

レビューありがとうございます。ご指摘の通り、soのほうが文脈的に自然ですね。