翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

備考: Webページの操作説明マニュアルです。

日本語

■Order Management System 操作マニュアル - 販売会社編

Order Management Systemにログインします。
まずWebブラウザで以下のURLにアクセスしてください。

初めてアクセスした時は、右の図のような認証ウィンドウが出ます。
別途お知らせしている「User name」を入力してOKを押して下さい。

ログイン画面が表示されます。
別途お知らせしている「User ID」を入力して、「Login」ボタンを押してログインしてください。

英語

■Order Management System Operating Manual - for Sales Companies

The direction below explains how to login to Order Management System.
First open a browser and access the URL below.

If it is your first time to access the page, you will jump to a certification page as shown on the right.
Please enter the "User name" that we have forwarded to you separately, and press OK.

Then the Login page will open.
Enter the "User ID" that we have forwarded to you separately, and press the "Login" button.

レビュー ( 1 )

jaysa66はこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2013/11/04 18:22:31

元の翻訳
■Order Management System Operating Manual - for Sales Companies

The direction below explains how to login to Order Management System.
First open a browser and access the URL below.

If it is your first time to access the page, you will jump to a certification page as shown on the right.
Please enter the "User name" that we have forwarded to you separately, and press OK.

Then the Login page will open.
Enter the "User ID" that we have forwarded to you separately, and press the "Login" button.

修正後
■Order Management System Operating Manual - for Sales Companies

Log in to the Order Management System.
First open a browser and access the URL below.

When the first time you access the page, a certification page as right image is shown up.
Please enter the "User name" that we have forwarded to you separately, and press "OK".

Then the login page will be opened.
Enter the "User ID" that we have forwarded to you separately, and log in by pressing the "Login" button.

マニュアルのようなので、簡潔な表現が良いかと思います。