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評価: 44 / 1 Review / 2013/10/20 20:07:39
shimatora345@gmail.comへご返金ください。
無理なら
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Send Moneyにて返金してください。
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ご納得出来なければこのままで結構です。
そうすれば、商品を返品し評価も再度します。
その際にリクエストを送ってください。
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返品時の送料もご請求させて頂きます。
早い解決を求めます。
Please arrange a refund for shimatora345@gmail.com. If impossible, please arrange a refund by Send Money. Any credit card is not available.
You can keep this situation if you are not satisfied my terms of refund.
If so, I will return the goods and evaluate it. Please send your REQUEST then.
Please email me upon completion of refund and let me know your sending address again. I will charge you for returns.
I hope your prompt action for this problem.
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元の翻訳
Please arrange a refund for shimatora345@gmail.com. If impossible, please arrange a refund by Send Money. Any credit card is not available.
You can keep this situation if you are not satisfied my terms of refund.
If so, I will return the goods and evaluate it. Please send your REQUEST then.
Please email me upon completion of refund and let me know your sending address again. I will charge you for returns.
I hope your prompt action for this problem.
修正後
Please arrange a refund for shimatora345@gmail.com. If impossible, please arrange a refund by Send Money. Please don't make a refund by credit card.
You can keep this situation if you are not satisfied my terms of refund.
If so, I will return the goods and evaluate it again. Please send your request then.
Please email me upon completion of refund and let me know your return address again. I will charge you for return shipping fee.
I demand your prompt action for this problem.
送料をreturn shipping feeというのは、Japanese Englishに聞こえます。
demandは相手に強い印象を与えてしまうので、原文に会わないように思います。
Thank you for your comments.
The better translation would be : I will charge you for return shipping.
Also, "shipping fee on return" and "return shipping costs" are also commonly used.
I agree with you that "demand" may sound stronger, but if you want to use "hope", the correct sentence would be: I hope that you can deal with this problem promptly. Or I look forward to your prompt solution to this problem.
Thank you.