翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

評価: 60 / 1 Review / 2013/10/16 15:38:32

kanakotok
kanakotok 60 Grown up in Hong Kong and New Zealand...
日本語

■コールセンター経歴
2002年4月1日
●●にオペレーターとして入社
オペレーター新人賞を受賞

2007年7月1日
同社コンタクトセンターにてスーパーバイザーに就任
国内宿泊部門を担当後、ライフサービス部門の立ち上げを担当

2008年4月1日 
同社コンタクトセンターにてチーフスーパーバイザーに就任
国内宿泊&ライフサービスのマルチスキル化を推進

2009年4月1日 同社コンタクトセンターにて副センター長に就任

利用件数 ●→●件(前期比%)
売上   ●→●円(前期比%)
収支   →黒字化

英語

history with a Phone Call Service Centre

01/Apr/2002

Joined the Phone Call Service Centre as an service operator

Awarded the Excellent operator award within Newlwy Hired workers.

01/Jul/2007
Been appointed to the supervisor in the contact Service Centre, established the Life Service Department, after being in charge of the Domestic Stay Department.

01/Apr/2008
Been appointed to the Chief supervisor.
Encouraged the multi-skilled environment in the Domestic Stay and the Life Service.

01/Apr/2009
Been appointed to the Vice Director in the Contact Service Centre

Numbers of the call made-⚫→⚫(⚫% compared to the previous year)
Sold ⚫→⚫Yen(⚫% compared to the previous year)
Balance Regained the surplus.

レビュー ( 1 )

jumot 50 2007年に日本語能力試験一級合格。
jumotはこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2013/10/23 00:47:32

元の翻訳
history with a Phone Call Service Centre

01/Apr/2002

Joined the Phone Call Service Centre as an service operator

Awarded the Excellent operator award within Newlwy Hired workers.

01/Jul/2007
Been appointed to the supervisor in the contact Service Centre, established the Life Service Department, after being in charge of the Domestic Stay Department.

01/Apr/2008
Been appointed to the Chief supervisor.
Encouraged the multi-skilled environment in the Domestic Stay and the Life Service.

01/Apr/2009
Been appointed to the Vice Director in the Contact Service Centre

Numbers of the call made-⚫→⚫(⚫% compared to the previous year)
Sold ⚫→⚫Yen(⚫% compared to the previous year)
Balance Regained the surplus.

修正後
history of Call Center

01/Apr/2002

Joined the Call Center as an service operator

Awarded the Excellent operator award within Newlwy Hired workers.

01/Jul/2007
Been appointed to the supervisor in the contact Service Center, established the Life Service Department, after being in charge of the Domestic Stay Department.

01/Apr/2008
Been appointed to the Chief supervisor.
Encouraged the multi-skilled environment in the Domestic Stay and the Life Service.

01/Apr/2009
Become Vice Director of the Contact Service Centre

Numbers of the call made-⚫→⚫(⚫% compared to the previous year)
Sold ⚫→⚫Yen(⚫% compared to the previous year)
Balance Regained the surplus.

It's understandable but I think its better with little changes

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