翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

あなたはとても返信が早いですね！

実は、今取引きしているショップは、とても返信が遅いです。

よって、価格は安いですが、定期購入時に時間がかかってしまいます。
長くつき合っていくためには、信頼関係の構築が不可欠です。

その点、あなたは返信が早く、信頼ができます。


なんとか、今取引きしている他のショップと同じ価格(送料込み○○$)で譲っていただけませんでしょうか？

今後も必ず継続的に購入させてただきます。

以上、宜しくお願い致します。

英語

Your response is amzingly quick!

Another shop I am dealing with is very slow to respond.

Therefore, it takes time when I place regular orders with them, although they offer a very good price for us. In order to maintain good relationship, you need to build up trust.

In this point, you always give us a quick reply and you are reliable.

So could you, in one way or another, offer us a good price as the another one we deal with does ($xxx, including shipping cost)?

We assure you our continued purchase from you.

Your consideration would be highly appreciated.

レビュー ( 1 )

katrina_zはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2013/08/12 02:45:03

元の翻訳
Your response is amzingly quick!

Another shop I am dealing with is very slow to respond.

Therefore, it takes time when I place regular orders with them, although they offer a very good price for us. In order to maintain good relationship, you need to build up trust.

In this point, you always give us a quick reply and you are reliable.

So could you, in one way or another, offer us a good price as the another one we deal with does ($xxx, including shipping cost)?

We assure you our continued purchase from you.

Your consideration would be highly appreciated.

修正後
Your response is amzingly quick!

Another shop I am dealing with is very slow to respond.

Therefore, it takes time when I place regular orders with them, although they offer a very good price for us. In order to maintain a good relationship, you need to build up trust.

In this point, you always give us a quick reply and you are reliable.

So could you, in one way or another, offer us a better price than the other one we deal with does ($xxx, including shipping cost)?

We assure our continued purchases from you.

Your consideration would be highly appreciated.

[14pon]

レヴュー、どうもありがとうございます！
a good relationship ですよねぇ。これはあとで気がつきました。
「他のショップと同じ価格」ですから、a better price than ではないでしょう？
another じゃなくて　other でしたね。
we assure you の you はいらないんですね？う～ん、これはまだ飲み込めていない。purchases は確かにそうですね。