翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

シンガポールは今朝もよい天気です

幸せな時間をいつもありがとう。
シンガポールに貴方を招待出来るよう、頑張ってきます！！
映画も日本で一緒に見ようね！！

今日の予定
午前中、昨日完了出来なかった交渉が、予定外だけど午前中入っているので、昨日夜に作業したメールに対して、今、日本のクライアントと電話会議を終えて、間もなく出発します。
１３：５５　チャンギ発
１５時（日本時間１７時＝▲２時間）　Phnom penh着　で移動します。
現地１９時から、カンボジア人の友人と夕食です。
また連絡するね！！

英語

We are enjoying nice weather in Singapore this morning.

Thank you for always giving me
I will try my hardest so I can invite you over to Singapore.
Let's go see a movie together in Japan!

Today's Schedule
It is not in the original schedule, but yesterday's unfinished negotiation needs to be taken care of in the morning. Regarding the email I worked on last night I have just finished a phone meeting with my Japanese client, and I am about to leave now.
13:55 Changi Departure
15:00(17:00 JST=-2:00) Phnom penh Arriving and on move.
From 19:00 in local time, I am going to meet with Cambodian friends for dinner.
I will message you later!

レビュー ( 1 )

mzarco1はこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2013/07/31 09:50:45

元の翻訳
We are enjoying nice weather in Singapore this morning.

Thank you for always giving me
I will try my hardest so I can invite you over to Singapore.
Let's go see a movie together in Japan!

Today's Schedule
It is not in the original schedule, but yesterday's unfinished negotiation needs to be taken care of in the morning. Regarding the email I worked on last night I have just finished a phone meeting with my Japanese client, and I am about to leave now.
13:55 Changi Departure
15:00(17:00 JST=-2:00) Phnom penh Arriving and on move.
From 19:00 in local time, I am going to meet with Cambodian friends for dinner.
I will message you later!

修正後
We are enjoying the nice weather in Singapore this morning.

Thank you for always giving me a wonderful time
I will try my hardest so I can invite you over to Singapore.
Let's go see a movie together in Japan!

Today's Schedule
It is not in the original schedule, but yesterday's unfinished negotiation needs to be taken care of in the morning. Regarding the email I worked on last night I have just finished a phone meeting with my Japanese client, and I am about to leave now.
13:55 Changi Departure
15:00(17:00 JST=-2:00) Phnom penh Arriving and on move.
From 19:00 in local time, I am going to meet with Cambodian friends for dinner.
I will message you later!

[shoheihagiwara]

レビューありがとうございます。theの抜け、giving me の後の不足、どちらも指摘していただいたとおりです。ありがとうございました。また機会がありましたらよろしくお願いします！