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ごあいさつ
この度は、輸入総代理ビジネスをするにあたり、
世界中のHPの優れた製品を探していましたところ、
御社のHPを見つけました。

とてもすばらしい製品で感動しました。
ぜひとも日本での販売は、ものは試しで
私に任せていただきたいと思いました。

私の想いを添付致します。
ご検討をお願いします。

英語

To whom it may concern,

Greetings,
I am starting up an importing business. As I have been researching great products online, I discovered your website.

I am very impressed with your products, and I was wondering if we have a chance to have business. I would like to sell your products for Japanese consumers exclusively.


Please see the attached for details. I am looking forward to hearing from you.

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[削除済みユーザ]はこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2013/06/05 08:18:50

元の翻訳
To whom it may concern,

Greetings,↵
I am starting up an importing business. As I have been researching great products online, I discovered your website.

I am very impressed with your products, and I was wondering if we have a chance to have business. I would like to sell your products for Japanese consumers exclusively.↵


Please see the attached for details. I am looking forward to hearing from you.

修正後
To whom it may concern:

I am starting up an importing business. As I have been researching great products online, I discovered your website.

I am very impressed with your products, and I was wondering if we have a chance to do business. I would like to sell your products for Japanese consumers exclusively.

Please see the attached for details. I am looking forward to hearing from you.

[[削除済みユーザ]]

ありがとうございました。勉強になりました。To whom it may concernの後の：は,どうして:なのでしょうか。教えて下さい。

[[削除済みユーザ]]

ご覧ください。

http://jobsearch.about.com/od/jobsearchglossary/g/to-whom-it-may-concern.htm

[[削除済みユーザ]]

ありがとうございます！：）