翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

親愛なる　ドクター　様
はじめまして、私は日本の沖縄で鍼灸クリニックを開業している那須秀利と申します。
私は視察を兼ねて、去年NZに行きました。あなたのクリニックをタカプナやパーネルで見かけ、さらにHPを見て沢山の支店があり事をしりました。
日本と同じ様に、NZでも鍼灸のニーズや関心が高い事を感じました。
私は、若い頃からラクビーが大好きで、
オールブラックスはあこがれのチームです。
今はラグビーから離れていますがチャレンジ精神は今も健在です。

英語

Dear the doctor.
Nice to meet you. I am Hidetoshi Nasu.
I went to NZ last year to do your inspection. I saw your clinics in Takapuna and parnell. And I saw your website, and understood many branches of yours.
I felt that many people in NZ are interested in and need acupunctures and moxibustions.
I like rugby since my youth, and yearn after allblacks.
Nowadays,I don't play rugby very much, but I still have a lot of challenge spirits.

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j_beck0811はこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2014/01/13 17:54:02

元の翻訳
Dear the doctor.
Nice to meet you. I am Hidetoshi Nasu.
I went to NZ last year to do your inspection. I saw your clinics in Takapuna and parnell. And I saw your website, and understood many branches of yours.
I felt that many people in NZ are interested in and need acupunctures and moxibustions.
I like rugby since my youth, and yearn after allblacks.
Nowadays,I don't play rugby very much, but I still have a lot of challenge spirits.

修正後
Dear the doctor.
Nice to meet you. I am Hidetoshi Nasu.
I went to NZ last year to inspect some hospitals. I saw your clinics in Takapuna and parnell.I also checked your website and realized that you have many branches.
I felt that many people in NZ are interested in and need acupunctures and moxibustions.
I like rugby since my youth, and yearn after allblacks.
Nowadays,I don't play rugby recently, but I still have a lot of challenge spirits.