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日本語

先日、注文した書籍が届きました
この注文のインボイスを送付して下さい

質問です
Berserk Vol. 22を注文しましたが、届いた書籍に含まれていませんでした
品切れですか？
またBerserk deluxe 3 はback order でしたが、いつ届けられますか？

サンプルインボイスを添付します。
私がアマゾンのVAT Calculation Settingsをしたのは10月です
アマゾンから7月のインボイスをダウンロードできないので、同じ形式で私が作成しました
注文詳細も添付します

英語

The publication that was ordered arrived the other day.
Please attach the invoice for this order.

A question:
Berserk Vol. 22 was ordered, but it was not including in the order that arrived.
Was it sold out?
Also, Berserk deluxe 3 was backordered, when might it arrive?

I have attached a sample invoice.
I have used Amazon's VAT Calculation Settings from October.
I cannot download July's invoice from Amazon, so I have made one with the same format.
I have also attached the order details

レビュー ( 1 )

nic_fはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2020/11/13 19:08:10

元の翻訳
The publication that was ordered arrived the other day.
Please attach the invoice for this order.

A question:
Berserk Vol. 22 was ordered, but it was not including in the order that arrived.
Was it sold out?
Also, Berserk deluxe 3 was backordered, when might it arrive?

I have attached a sample invoice.
I have used Amazon's VAT Calculation Settings from October.
I cannot download July's invoice from Amazon, so I have made one with the same format.
I have also attached the order details

修正後
The books that I ordered arrived the other day.
Please send the invoice for this order.

A question:
I ordered Berserk Vol. 22, but it was not included in the order that arrived.
Was it sold out?
Also, Berserk deluxe 3 was backordered, when might it arrive?

I have attached a sample invoice.
I have used Amazon's VAT Calculation Settings from October.
I cannot download July's invoice from Amazon, so I have made one with the same format.
I have also attached the order details

Good overall. I would consider not using passive voice in an email like this.　書籍 is 'pubications', but 'books' seems more appropriate in this case. Otherwise small mistakes (i.e. "including" should be "included").

[dunbarhonyaku]

Thanks for the review. I appreciate it.