In contrast Lance et al. (1995) found college students with high global SWB to be highly satisfied with their housing and finances ( in a top-down model), and satisfaction with the partner and leisure to have the highest impact on global SWB ( in a bottom-up model). Health was not substantially related to global SWB - as young people are generally in good health, they do not seem to be greatly concerned by health issues. However, as higher education in the US is quite expensive, it was students in a more privileged financial situation who enjoyed higher levels of global SWB.
Error terms of manifest variables are omitted from Fig.1 to ensure clarity of presentation
明白な誤差項変数は発表の明確さを保証するため、図1から除外されている。
顕在変数の誤差項は、説明を明確にするため図1から削除している。
マニフェストの変わりやすさという誤った表現は、プレゼンテーションを明確にするため、図1から消します。
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