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山本遊子 (yamamoto_yuko) — Written Reviews

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yamamoto_yuko rated this translation result as ★★★★★ Japanese → English
09 Jan 2014 at 23:11

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In other words, His works were highly regarded in foreign countries.
They have once again recognized until they came back to Japan.

His second movie version "Innocence" was also made afterwards.

Ghost in the Shell STAND ALONE COMPLEX

In Ghost in the Shell OVA
He became one of the most famous animation directors.
He participated in a study group called "Oshii Jyuku" and it is a recognition-work of director Kenji Kamiyama.

He made 2 films. The first one "STAND ALONE COMPLEX" is especially a remarkable work recognized by a great animation director and his teacher Mr. Oshii.

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In other words, his works were highly regarded in foreign countries.
They were once again recognized when they came back to Japan.

His second movie version "Innocence" was also made afterwards.

Ghost in the Shell: STAND ALONE COMPLEX

In Ghost in the Shell OVA,
he became one of the most famous animation directors.
He participated in a study group (workshop?) called "Oshii Jyuku" and it is a recognition-work* of the director Kenji Kamiyama.

He made 2 films. The first, "STAND ALONE COMPLEX", is an especially remarkable work recognized by the great animation director and his teacher, Mr. Oshii.

yamamoto_yuko rated this translation result as ★★★★★ Japanese → English
18 May 2013 at 00:03
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とても良く訳せていると思います！お疲れ様です。 原文の意味もニュアンスもとても端的に伝わりますね。 四行目は「thank you for the (/your) offer」もしくは「thank you for offering」とも表現できますね;-) 「the ...
yamamoto_yuko rated this translation result as ★★★★★ English → Japanese
08 May 2013 at 16:34
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翻訳だと感じさせない自然な表現で、すばらしいと思います。 （実は、「原文より良くなっている」と思ってしまいました）
yamamoto_yuko rated this translation result as ★★★★★ Japanese → English
01 May 2013 at 23:46
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簡潔で原文を的確に反映した良い翻訳だと思います。 私も自分が翻訳をするときに、ぜひ参考にさせていただきます。 どうぞよろしくお願い致します。 （"by a cheap method" の部分ですが、「なるべく安く」（つまり、安ければ安いほど良いのでは）ということで...
yamamoto_yuko rated this translation result as ★★★★★ Japanese → English
22 Apr 2013 at 18:00
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はじめまして。お疲れ様です。細かいことですが、based>based onと、which pushed to>which it is pushed toの二点だけ気がつきました。・・・Conyacではじっくり訳文を検討する余裕を持ちにくいので難しいですね。お互い頑張りましょ...
yamamoto_yuko rated this translation result as ★★★★★ Japanese → English
22 Apr 2013 at 18:27
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お疲れ様です:-) 立派な訳だと思います。（4行目の最初だけ小文字になってしまっているようですが、Conyacではなかなか訳文を吟味する余裕がないので大変ですよね・・・お互い頑張りましょう！）
yamamoto_yuko rated this translation result as ★★★★★ Japanese → English
22 Apr 2013 at 18:16
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お疲れ様です:-) How much ""Kawaii" are they? のところだけ、How "kawaii" are they?の方がいいかなと思いました。そうそう、それから、翻訳画面の右端に、依頼者からの指示があることがありますよ！（この場合は「 Addition...