naomi_927 — Received Reviews
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About 12 years ago
Japan
Japanese (Native)
English
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English → Japanese
30 May 2014 at 15:12
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Comment Hi dearで始まるため口語調で訳したのだと思いますが、内容はビジネスですので「なんてふざけたベンダーなんだ。こんなところとは取引しないぞ！」とお客さんを怒らせてしまう可能性があります。冒頭のHi dearは「こんにちは」または「お世話になります」、文末は「です、ます」調... |