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original I would like to sell your product at amazon.co.jp and my own internet shop .I'd like permission to do so.Thank you in advance.
corrected I would like to sell your product at amazon.co.jp and my own internet shop .I'd like permission to do so. わかりますが、冠詞に類するものはあったほうがいいです。↵(I'd like your permission to do so.とyourがあったほうがいいと思います)Thank you in advance.