HIRO (hiroaki5722) — Received Reviews

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rated this translation result as ★★ Japanese → English 13 Oct 2014 at 23:10
original My name is Yoshida. ↵ I met Susy.↵ Thank you very much to spare your precious time.↵ I came back to Japan yesterday.↵ Our team will do our best even if we run into any obstacle during the next bussiness. ↵ I'm looking forward to seeing you.↵ From now on, we wiil work in consultation with Susy in each case.↵ I'm grateful for seeing you.↵ Please allow me to email you.	corrected My name is Yoshida, and I met Susy. Thank you very much for sparing your precious time. I came back to Japan yesterday. Our team will do our best even if we run into any obstacle as we take on the next bussiness. I'm looking forward to seeing you next time. From now on, we wiil work in consultation with Susy in each case. I'm grateful that I have met you. Please allow me to email you [ambiguous, not specific as the original].

rated this translation result as ★★ Japanese → English

13 Oct 2014 at 23:10

original
My name is Yoshida. ↵
I met Susy.↵
Thank you very much to spare your precious time.↵
I came back to Japan yesterday.↵
Our team will do our best even if we run into any obstacle during the next bussiness. ↵
I'm looking forward to seeing you.↵
From now on, we wiil work in consultation with Susy in each case.↵
I'm grateful for seeing you.↵
Please allow me to email you.

corrected
My name is Yoshida, and I met Susy. Thank you very much for sparing your precious time. I came back to Japan yesterday. Our team will do our best even if we run into any obstacle as we take on the next bussiness. I'm looking forward to seeing you next time. From now on, we wiil work in consultation with Susy in each case. I'm grateful that I have met you. Please allow me to email you [ambiguous, not specific as the original].

rated this translation result as ★★★ English → Japanese 14 Oct 2014 at 12:29
Comment 多少、冗長な箇所が見受けられるようです。また一つ一つの単語も丁寧に訳されるともっと良いかと思います。”お得意客様”→”お得意様”、”無料で緊急処理してアップグレードされます。”→”無償にて緊急対応させていただきます。”　etc...

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 13 Oct 2014 at 21:17
original ex. the case that the product was unsent after payment, the case that the product was broken and so on. In fact, "paypal", not "ebay", arranges a refund for you if something was wrong. Paypal has a system of "buyer protection" to protect buyer. Please confirm to the following URL about the guarantee system of paypal. Above system enables you to obtain a full refund if you apply to the guarantee system for the reason that the product was unsent or broken.	corrected ex. the case that the product was unsent after payment, the case that the product was broken and so on. In fact, PayPal, not eBay, issues you a refund if something goes wrong. PayPal has a system of "buyer protection" to protect buyers. Please review the following URL about the PayPal guarantee system. Above system allows you to obtain a full refund if you apply to the guarantee system for the reason that the product was unsent or broken.

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English

13 Oct 2014 at 21:17

original
ex. the case that the product was unsent after payment, the case that the product was broken and so on.

In fact, "paypal", not "ebay", arranges a refund for you if something was wrong.

Paypal has a system of "buyer protection" to protect buyer.
Please confirm to the following URL about the guarantee system of paypal.

Above system enables you to obtain a full refund if you apply to the guarantee system for the reason that the product was unsent or broken.

corrected
ex. the case that the product was unsent after payment, the case that the product was broken and so on.

In fact, PayPal, not eBay, issues you a refund if something goes wrong.

PayPal has a system of "buyer protection" to protect buyers.
Please review the following URL about the PayPal guarantee system.

Above system allows you to obtain a full refund if you apply to the guarantee system for the reason that the product was unsent or broken.

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 13 Oct 2014 at 21:23
original When will you pay me back? I gave you back the item after your recognition about returening goods and paying back money. But then, you did not pay me back althogh you received the item. This is undoubted fraud. If you have a beef, and you are not going to pay me back, give me back the item at once.	corrected When will you pay me back? I gave you back the item after you agreed to returening [spelling] goods and paying back money. But then, you did not pay me back althogh [spelling] you received the item. This is a fraud. If you have a beef [with 返されたアイテムの状態], and you are not going to pay me back, give me back the item at once.

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 13 Oct 2014 at 17:22
original When will you pay me back? I gave you back the item after your recognition about returening goods and paying back money. But then, you did not pay me back althogh you received the item. This is undoubted fraud. If you have a beef, and you are not going to pay me back, give me back the item at once.	corrected When will you pay me back? I gave you back the item after your recognition about returening goods and paying back money. But then, you have not paid me back although you received the item. This is undoubted fraud. If you have a beef, and you are not going to pay me back, give me back the item at once.

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