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rated this translation result as ★★ Japanese → English 19 Dec 2012 at 19:05
Comment Mr.は不要なのでとる。全体を直しました。 「Really popular, you see it all the time in Japan. I should make an exclusive Mike Suzuki Samurai TSCO and send i...

rated this translation result as ★★ Japanese → English 19 Dec 2012 at 18:59
Comment 「The Suzuki Samurai TSCO version exclusive to Mike is also made and sent .(lol) Please show me to take a picture side by side with a real...

rated this translation result as ★★ Japanese → English 19 Dec 2012 at 18:49
Comment 全体的に直しました。 Thank you in so many ways for your kindness!! When I told my friends about Mike, they were so excited!! The fact that we wi...

rated this translation result as ★★★★★ Japanese → English 19 Dec 2012 at 18:30
Comment まず、（笑はlolですね。なので(laughs)の部分を(lol)に変える。 「Otaka thought that we made it ourselves (laughs).」の部分を「They thought that I made it myself (lol)....

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English 17 Dec 2012 at 15:10
Comment 「This is kohinokuma2012 that purchased the item in eBay the other day.」ではなく、「This is kohinokuma2012 who purchased the item on eBay the o...

rated this translation result as ★★★ English → Japanese 10 Dec 2012 at 11:00
Comment 2行目「私たちの商品ラインアップで一番低品質の～」の部分は、在庫切れについて言っているので、「qty」をquantityと理解し、「最も在庫数が少ない」ということだと思います。 その他の部分は大変良い翻訳ですね。

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English 10 Dec 2012 at 11:12
Comment make sure the parcel wrapped >> make sure the parcel is wrapped (isが抜けていました) 他の部分は良い翻訳だと思います。

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English 10 Dec 2012 at 11:10
Comment 梱包する：do the packing>>pack/package it 他の部分は良い翻訳ですね。

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 10 Dec 2012 at 11:20
Comment "When I tracked it by USPS, it shows that it has been delivered." The tense must match, so it should be "When I tracked it on USPS, it s...

rated this translation result as ★★★★★ Japanese → English 10 Dec 2012 at 11:37
Comment 4行目、「When you come, be sure to look for Maru!」>>「まるを誘って」なので、「When you come, be sure to invite Maru!」だと思います。 他の部分は大変良い翻訳ですね。

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English 10 Dec 2012 at 12:23
Comment いくつか指摘しておきます。 ・1行目"When we hear the siren of an ambulance or the announcement" (theをaにする) --> "When we hear a siren of an ambulance or a...

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 10 Dec 2012 at 12:11
Comment いくつか下記に指摘しました。 "it is what is called as a conditioned response." asは不要ですので、--> "it is what is called a conditioned response." "Once it...

rated this translation result as ★★★★ English → Japanese 09 Dec 2012 at 20:11
Comment 原文からはこのように訳すのが精一杯ですよね。

rated this translation result as ★★★ English → Japanese 09 Dec 2012 at 20:26
Comment 2行目の「もっと安く売られているお店はありますでしょうか」→「値下げをお願いできますでしょうか」だと思います。 その他の部分は概ね良いですね。

rated this translation result as ★★★★★ English → Japanese 09 Dec 2012 at 20:31
Comment 細かいところですが、商品名「～in Black」のところは「黒」とした方が良いのではと思いました。 他は大変素晴らしい訳だと思います。

rated this translation result as ★★★ English → Japanese 30 Nov 2012 at 12:48
Comment 「返金金額のタイプとして」→「返金金額を入力し、」 その他の翻訳はとても良いと思います。

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 17 Dec 2012 at 14:49
Comment 「また、商品を購入することになったら、是非連絡させてください。」の部分は主語が語り手なので、 "Also, if you're going to purchase anything, please contact me." ではなく、"I'll let you know ...

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 17 Dec 2012 at 14:58
Comment まず、グリコはGurikoではなく、Glicoですね。 5行目の「創造性をくすぐる～」の部分は、The toy tickles the children their creativity and has endless possibilities! ではなく、>> A v...

rated this translation result as ★★★★ English → Japanese 27 Nov 2012 at 15:07
Comment とても自然な訳で良いです。

rated this translation result as ★★ English → Japanese 27 Nov 2012 at 15:13
Comment 残念ながら良い翻訳とは言えないと思います。 ですます調が統一されていませんし、「持つ」の使い方も不自然です。