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Ai Takanohashi (ai-tak) — Received Reviews

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Over 7 years ago Female 30s
Japan
Japanese (Native) English

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mars16 rated this translation result as ★★★★★ English → Japanese
26 Apr 2017 at 11:39

original
Dear Ms. Smith,

Hope you are doing well.
In Japan now cherry blossoms are falling and it is telling us the beginning of summer.

I am writing this email to confirm if your shop will be open in this August. Is your shop being closed in the summer vacation season?

I am planning to visit LA on Aug 3rd and stay until 13th so if your shop is open during my stay, I would love to come and see you there!

My translator is coming with me so you don't need to concern about the language.

Please let me know if you have already fixed your business days.

I look forward to your reply.


Best regards,
(Name)

corrected
Dear Ms. Smith,

Hope you are doing well.
In Japan now cherry blossoms are falling and it is telling us the beginning of summer.

I am writing this email to confirm if your shop will be open in this August. Or is your shop being closed in the summer vacation season?

I am planning to visit LA on Aug 3rd and stay until 13th so if your shop is open during my stay, I would love to come and see you there!

My translator is coming with me so you don't need to concern about the language.

Please let me know if you have already fixed your business days.

I look forward to your reply.


Best regards,
(Name)