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Rating: 50 / 1 Review / 20 Aug 2017 at 19:08

sakura_1984
sakura_1984 50 日本在住の日本語ネイティブです。 英語から日本語への翻訳を中心に対応して...
Japanese

こんにちは。
8月8日発送分の荷物についてお聞きします。
FDX Econ to: JP 19.90 lbs Tracking# 779851424508

PACKAGE ID 01-387-5391 Shopsapien $49.98

が届いた荷物から見つかりませんでした。

貴社にて入れ間違いなどの可能性がありますので、確認をお願いします。

English

Hello.
I ask you the package which was shipped August 8th.
FDX Econ to: JP 19.90 lbs Tracking# 779851424508

I couldn't find below item in the package.
PACKAGE ID 01-387-5391 Shopsapien $49.98

There is a probability that you make a mistake like wrong packing, so please check.

Reviews ( 1 )

[deleted user] 59 This is a Japanese freelance translat...
[deleted user] rated this translation result as ★★★ 23 Aug 2017 at 06:14

original
Hello.
I ask you the package which was shipped August 8th.
FDX Econ to: JP 19.90 lbs Tracking# 779851424508

I couldn't find below item in the package.
PACKAGE ID 01-387-5391 Shopsapien $49.98

There is a probability that you make a mistake like wrong packing, so please check.

corrected
Hello.
I ask you the package which was shipped on August 8th.
FDX Econ to: JP 19.90 lbs Tracking# 779851424508

I could not find the item listed below in the package I received:
PACKAGE ID 01-387-5391 Shopsapien $49.98

I am afraid you may have made a mistake such as wrong packing, so please check it out.

[deleted user] [deleted user] 23 Aug 2017 at 06:17

"There is a probability 〜"は、日本語の直訳です。自然な英語を書いてください。

sakura_1984 sakura_1984 23 Aug 2017 at 12:06

レビューありがとうございます。直訳ではなく自然に訳せるよう、引き続き精進して参ります。

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