Translator Reviews ( Japanese → English )

Additional info: eBayでニンテンドー64のゲームソフトを出品する際に記載する説明文の一部です。「メモリー拡張パック」は英語名で"Memory Expansion Pak"でお願いします。

Japanese

・このゲームをプレイするためには、「メモリー拡張パック」が必要です。
この出品物には含まれておりませんので、別途ご用意下さい。

・「メモリー拡張パック」が含まれていないことを理由に、
商品の返品を承ることはできません。

English

- In order to play this game, you need to install "Memory Expansion Pack".
It does not come with the item on the list, please prepare it separately.

- I am sorry that I cannot accept the return of the item because the item does not include "Memory Expansion Pack".

Reviews ( 1 )

ep_ntt_thuy rated this translation result as ★★★★ 08 Aug 2016 at 10:46

original
- In order to play this game, you need to install "Memory Expansion Pack".
It does not come with the item on the list, please prepare it separately.

- I am sorry that I cannot accept the return of the item because the item does not include "Memory Expansion Pack".

corrected
- In order to play this game, you need to install "Memory Expansion Pack".
It does not come with the item on the list, please prepare it separately.

- I cannot accept the return of the item because the item does not include "Memory Expansion Pack".

[ka28310]

Hi, Thuy! Thank you for your review. I had been out on business trip for four days since last week.
The summer vacation season is just around the corner. I wish you will have happy summer days and very good luck! Regards. Katsuya

[ep_ntt_thuy]

That's how I did't see your work as usual. Well come back and have a nice week! Do you plan to take the level test again to upgrade your status?

[ka28310]

Yes, Thuy. Level tests of Conyac is indeed my homework. In the past I failed two times in English->Japanese test due to some careless mistakes. and also I failed in English -> Japanese test once. Unlike Light request, we can put enough amount of time on considering and reviewing the translation as you already know. I hope I can secure some amount of time in August during my vacation. How about you? You'll try to step up in English -> Japanese language pair as well soon? I believe you'll also pass it because you always understand the Japanese context very accurately.

[ep_ntt_thuy]

I surely want to upgrade my status but do not have enough confident (the last time I was graded standard but at the lowest rank - only 53). Maybe I will wait a while until my Japanese comprehension and English writing skills are improved a little bit more.

[ka28310]

I feel strong sympathy with you! I also do not have confident, either. But, let's do not be afraid of making mistakes. I believe practice makes perfect ! (or at least we are getting closer to better perfect as long as we keep struggling.) Shall we improve ourselves while we cut and try a lot, instead of just waiting? I really have a lot of respect for your enthusiasm.