Translator Reviews ( Japanese → English )

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Japanese

はじめまして。
突然の連絡大変失礼します。

価格交渉の件で連絡しています。

あなた（貴社）が販売している商品ですが、
送料込で合計**ドルで購入できませんか。

値引可能でしたら、お金はpaypal経由で24時間以内に即支払います。

また、もし価格交渉が可能でしたら、
今後も継続して購入を考えています。

お忙しい所恐れ入りますが
ご検討の程よろしくお願いいたします。

English

Hello.

I am writing you regarding the price.

May I purchase an item by your company at the price $** including shipping cost?

If the discount is available, I will pay you via PayPal within 24 hours.

If you could give me an discount, I would like to purchase your items again.

Thank you for your consideration and I look forward to hearing from you.

Reviews ( 1 )

yxn667 rated this translation result as ★★★★ 12 Feb 2015 at 09:36

original
Hello.

I am writing you regarding the price.

May I purchase an item by your company at the price $** including shipping cost?

If the discount is available, I will pay you via PayPal within 24 hours.

If you could give me an discount, I would like to purchase your items again.

Thank you for your consideration and I look forward to hearing from you.

corrected
Hello.

I am writing you regarding the price.

May I purchase an item by your company at the price $** including shipping cost?

If the discount is available, I will pay you via PayPal within 24 hours.

If you could give me a discount, I would like to purchase your items again.

Thank you for your consideration and I look forward to hearing from you.